ocean breezes short version – kim

door flys open in the middle of the night
slamming. heart stopping. dogs whimper.
gale force winds enter our little silver cocoon as we lay by the oceans edge.

(long version)

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  1. lilalia said

    Having read the longer version, I find the short version really captures the feeling.

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